看看我的英语作文有多少分我是初三的学生满分15分Jack去年来的重庆的一所中学学校。在学习期间，他发现该校的学生学校主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐

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看看我的英语作文有多少分 我是初三的学生 满分15分
Jack去年来的重庆的一所中学学校。在学习期间，他发现该校的学生学校主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处。请你以Jack的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封字数80左右的信，介绍学校的现状和你的感受。 Dear Mum and Dda, Time flies! I've been here for nearly a year .I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school are get along well with students and teachers .They will help students who are in trouble .Of course ,they also helped me,especially a student named Jam is very kind.Friendship is built up between I and Jam.The school is the most beautiful of that I have even seen .Environment there is quiet well .It make me in a good mood .In short ,I have a good life in there .Please don't worried about me. At last ,best wishes for you . Yours Jack

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第一句最好改成How time flies! （你的原文写法我还真没见过啊） 第三句Get前面的Are要删掉 这句也有问题 我觉得最好改成The students in our school are get along well with each other. 后面应该是between Jam and me （介词后跟宾语 而不是主语） 再后面一句改成 The school is the most beautiful one that I have ever seen . 后面的well改成good （well做形容词是身体好的意思 good没有这个区别） 再后面 make改成第三人称单数形式makes 而且 me后面要加一个单词be （make sb do sth) 倒数第三句 in there 的in要去掉（there是副词 所以不要介词in） 倒数第二句 把worried改成worry （前面已经有助动词do了 所以要原形worry） 好了 多少分你自己应该清楚了吧 十四分必然是没有了····· 不管怎样你要学的还很多 祝你学业进步吧