请帮我修改下这篇小短文,我是初中生,英语不太好,请各位帮下忙.我把短文打下来,请帮我写改,MyRoomMyroomisverynice.Therearetwopicturesandtwophotosonthewall,Thereisanewbedinmyroom.nearthebedThe

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请帮我修改下这篇小短文,我是初中生,英语不太好,请各位帮下忙.我把短文打下来,请帮我写改,
My Room
My room is very nice .There are two pictures and two photos on the wall ,There is a new bed in my room .near the bed There is a clock on the wall .In my room there is a TV ,on the TV there is a VCD and a air conditioning .This is my room!

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My Room
My room is very nice . There are two pictures and two photos on the wall. I have a new bed in my room, above the bed there is a clock on the wall . Besides the wall there is a TV , on the TV there is a VCD and an air conditioner . This is my room!
主要是需要注意描写的顺序和上下文的衔接,然后帮你改了下一些语句的用法和部分大小写,这样更加准确也不会显得很累赘拖沓.