拜托哪位大哥大姐帮我完成一下英文自我介绍吧～Hello,It'sapleasuretomeetyouall.I'mveryhappythatI'mqualifiedforthisinterview.Mynameiskerry,I'm20yearsold,Iamgraduatefromshanghaidonghuivocationalandtechnica

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拜托哪位大哥大姐帮我完成一下英文自我介绍吧～
Hello,It's a pleasure to meet you all.I'm very happy that I'm qualified for this interview.My name is kerry,I'm 20 years old,I am graduate from shanghai donghui vocational and technical school and major in international commerce.Is reading the technical college,studies is the business management specialty.I once worked in the transport agent company as the merchandiser.I am hospitable and optimistic,adaptive capacity is strong,it is serious to work .my hobby is at writting,reading,singing and traveling.
I am very interested in this position,which can provide me more chance and challenge.Finally,thanks all of you for giving this chance for stating my wishes.I do wish that I can become a qualified staff in the position I applied for.Thank you very much.
这是我自己写的,请大家帮我把有错误的地方改一下并加以完善,最好附上中文对照,感激不敬,

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It's a pleasure to meet you all --> It's my pleasureI'm qualified for this interview.Qualified 不是这样用的(A qualified doctor)简单的一句 I'am grateful(表示感谢) to be chosen for this interview 就可以...