求英文大神帮忙修改这段话,修改下语法加润色~签证官提出质疑,要求我解释留学期间在干嘛才能续签,求大神修改润色!IhadlearnedtheESLcoursesfromNov.of2011toApr.of2012atLCollege,andthenstudiedthe

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求英文大神帮忙修改这段话,修改下语法加润色~
签证官提出质疑,要求我解释留学期间在干嘛才能续签,求大神修改润色!
I had learned the ESL courses from Nov.of 2011 to
Apr.of 2012 at L College,and then studied the U T program at A College from the 2012 fall term to the 2013 winter term.After
I found I was not interesting in the UT course,I changed to B school to countinue
my study in BM program and finished it on August 2014,
with the GAP point of 71%.Since I am in China now,it’s unavailable for me to
submit all the official transcripts,so I would submit the transcripts which
I can found in my school account website.If possible,I can return to get it in
the end.Now,I have been accepted by the XX program,and got a part-time job.Hopefully
I can get a chance to gain more valuable experiences in C country.

Answer 1

I had completed the ESL courses from Nov. of 2011 to Apr. of 2012 at L College, and then studied the U T program at A College from the 2012 fall term to the 2013 winter term.Having realized BM program...