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A SUNNING KID
I have a good friend.Her name is XiaoYang.She is a sunning kid
She is 14 years old and she is a tender and outstanging girl.She is very popular because she often help others such as teachers students and parents.So everyone like her very much. She is optimistic.What difficulties have not hit her down.
She is a sunning kid.I'll learn from her.
MY HOLIDAY
This holiday I went to JingHong by car.It took us two hours to go there.We went to the Plant Garden.It was crowded and the tickets were very expensive.But the Plant Garden was very beautiful.There had all kinds of plants.And I feasted my eyes on the Plant Garden.We spent the whole day in there.
On that day,we were tired but happy.I want to go there again.

Answer 1

A SUNNY KID
I have a good friend.Her name is XiaoYang.She is a sunny girl.
She is 14 years old and she is a tender and outstanging(这个词你想表达什么？） girl.She is very popular because she often helps others， such as teachers ，students and parents.So everyone likes her very much. She is optimistic.What difficulties have not hit her down.
She is a sunny girl .I'll learn from her.
MY HOLIDAY
This holiday I went to JingHong by car.It took us two hours to go there.We went to the Plant Garden.It was crowded and the tickets were very expensive.But the Plant Garden was very beautiful.There were all kinds of plants.And I feasted my eyes on the Plant Garden.We spent the whole day there.
On that day,we were tired but happy.I want to go there again.