请问这句话有什么语法错误啊Hescoldedthemnotbecausechildrenquarrelling,butpraisedthemseveralwhentheyplaypeacefully.Manystudentsinourclasswerecriticizedpublicastheyhadnothandinthecompositionsontime.

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请问这句话有什么语法错误啊
He scolded them not because children quarrelling,but praised them several when they play peacefully.Many students in our class were criticized public as they had not hand in the compositions on time.

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应该是
He scold the children when who were quarreling and praised several of them whom were playing peacefully.
many students in our class were criticized in public as they had not handed their compositions on time.