英语翻译“数码热升华”是当前欧美最流行的纺织品印花技术.它采用特殊的染料墨水,使用先进的数码喷绘技术,将设计完美的图案打印在专用的转移纸上.然后,将转移纸上的图案用专用的设

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英语翻译
“数码热升华”是当前欧美最流行的纺织品印花技术.它采用特殊的染料墨水,使用先进的数码喷绘技术,将设计完美的图案打印在专用的转移纸上.然后,将转移纸上的图案用专用的设备加热、加压,使转移纸上图案的染料分子与纺织品（布料）的分子相结合,从而在纺织品上形成绚丽多彩的图案.
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"Digital Sublimation" is currently the most popular European and American textile printing technology.It uses the special dye-based ink and the advanced digital inkjet technology,and then design the perfect logo printed on special transfer paper.The transfer of paper patterns used q special equipment for heating,pressure,so that the transfer of the pattern paper and textile dye molecules (cloth) molecules combine to form a colorful textile patterns.

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It uses the special dye-based ink and the advanced 我觉得这里两个the不需要
design the perfect logo printed on special transfer paper
这句应该倒一下吧,改成
print perfect designed logo on special transfer paper
for heating ,pressure改成get heated and pressured
combine 改成can get combined
这是我的想法~.