请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“你好，原来这些话是想当着你面说得。可是你似乎因为新。。。”中文部分：你好，原来这些话是想当着你面说得。可是你似乎因为新的工作而变

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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“你好，原来这些话是想当着你面说得。可是你似乎因为新。。。”
中文部分：
你好，原来这些话是想当着你面说得。可是你似乎因为新的工作而变得很忙，而另一方面，其实我也很忙。因此还是给你写封信。
像我们这样认识的人，好像一般都只有两种结局。变回陌生人不再联系，或者发展一段感情。我想，发展一段感情似乎是不太可能了；而且，每次你短信再问我干什么的时候，我好像不是在学习，就是再为学习犯愁。似乎我现在的状态也不适合去开始一段感情。但因此我们就要变陌生人了吗。我可不想这样。因为认识了你，我知道了一个英俊的运动员，认识了一个好听的歌手，发现了twitter的好处。这些都让我在生活上收到了一些启发，和得到了一些新的乐趣。另一边面，其实留学生活其实也是不容易的，我当然不会像你寻求一些物质上的帮助，因为我觉得我够独立，但是偶尔还是需要和一个人喝杯咖啡，聊聊天或者一起做一些有趣的事。
我的翻译：
Hi, actually I want to talk this to you face to face at the beginning. But you seem very busy after you get the new job and on the other hand, I was always busy, too. So I decided to write a letter to you.
There looks only two result which the way we met each other: back to strangers and no longer contact or started a relationship. Now I already know exactly there has no change to started a relationship. And also, I figured out that this is not a good time for me to start a relationship since every time you ask 'how was the day' and my answer always was studying or planing to study. But also, I don't want that we two become strangers. Since I met you, I know a handsome score athlete, a good pop singer and the benefit of twitter. All these give me a different view about life and I got fun from them. In another hand, Actually life is not easy as an oversea student, I think I'm enough individual and would never ask the help about (物质上), but sometimes I really need a friend could have a cafe or have a chat or do something fun.

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写的不错!
Hi, actually at first I want to talk about this with you face to face. But you seem very busy after getting the new job and on the other hand, I am also busy. So I decided to write this letter to you.
It seems that there are only two types of ending for us who met each other this way: back to become strangers with no more contact or start a relationship. Now I already know exactly there has no chance to start a relationship. And also, I figured out that this is not a good time for me to start a relationship since every time you ask 'how was the day' and my answer always was studying or planing to study. But also, I don't want that we two become strangers. Since I met you, I know a handsome score athlete, a good pop singer and the benefit of twitter. All these give me a different view about life and I got joy from them. On another hand, actually life is not easy as an overseas student, I think I'm independent enough and will never seek material help, but sometimes I really need a friend who can accompany me to a cafe or chat or simply have fun.