英语好的进帮我检查两句话1Iwon'tgiveupuntilyougiveup2Thoughgoddidn'tgivemeatallthinbodywithabeautifulface,Istillfeelnice,becausehehasgavememanyfriendsaroundmeeverydayeverywhere.看看有哪里是有错误

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英语好的进
帮我检查两句话
1 I won't give up until you give up
2 Though god didn't give me a tall thin body with a beautiful face,I still feel nice,because he has gave me many friends around me everyday everywhere.
看看有哪里是有错误的.比如语法语序啊,

Answer 1

1 I won't give up until you give up.这句没问题,但可以简化：
I won't give up until you do.
2 Though god didn't give me a tall thin body with a beautiful face,I still feel nice,because he has gave me many friends around me everyday everywhere.
这句重写：
Though god didn't give me a tall and thin body with a beautiful face,I still feel good,because he has given me many friends who are close to me all the time .