五句话检查是否有语病修改更正（中小学水平）Doyouthinkheishandsome?（要不要加that）Theytrytheirbestin(还是for)theirmusiccareer.Hewrotesomespecialsongstoencouragepeopletotrytomakethierdreamscome

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五句话检查是否有语病 修改更正 （中小学水平）
Do you think he is handsome?（要不要加that）

They try their best in (还是for) their music career.
He wrote some special songs to encourage people to try to make thier dreams come true.(到底哪里要用to哪里不用啊?）
He plays a positive role in encouraging people.
I am glad  that I can enjoy the live music from(还是of) this great band.
这五句话是我自己写对话时候用到的 但是总觉得不对 麻烦修改指正 要准确哦——非常谢谢!

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Do you think he is handsome?☺They try their best with their music career.He wrote some special songs to encourage people to try to make thier dreams come true.☺He plays a positive role in ...