请英语老师解答!老师这是我翻译的句子,您看看可以吗?加拿大国土面积比中国大,人口却不足3000万Canadaonlyhaslessthan30millionsofpeoplewhilehavingalandarealargerthanthatofChina.温哥华的辉煌是

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请英语老师解答!
老师这是我翻译的句子,您看看可以吗?
加拿大国土面积比中国大,人口却不足3000万
Canada only has less than 30 millions of people while having a land area larger than that of China.
温哥华的辉煌是温哥华华人的智慧和勤奋的结晶.
The prosperity of wengehua is the fruit of wengehua chinese‘s diligence and wisdom.

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您好,很高兴为您加拿大国土面积比中国大,人口却不足3000万Canada only has less than 30 million (million不加s, 删除of) people while having a 【larger】 land area than that of China.温哥华的辉煌是温哥华华...