英语翻译改革开放以来,特别是“十一五”时期,加快了铁路现代化进程,实现了铁路快速发展.翻译一下为：Sincethereformandopeningup,especiallyduringtheperiodof12thfive-yearplan,themodernizationprocesso

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英语翻译
改革开放以来,特别是“十一五”时期,加快了铁路现代化进程,实现了铁路快速发展.
翻译一下为：
Since the reform and opening up,especially during the period of 12th five-year plan,the modernization process of railway has been accelerated and rapid development has been realized.
后面一句用了两个has been,好像有些重复的感觉,如果翻译为the modernization process of railway has been accelerated and rapid development realized.这样可不可以,就是省略第二个has been,记得好像可以,但不确定.
如果不行的话,还有什么别的方法?被动语态首先是要求用的.

Answer 1

你所说的完全可以.在时态、单复数没有冲突的情况下,一般均省略赘词.