英语翻译请帮我看看这篇文章的错处,有的地方如果能够改得更深刻、优美的,NowmylifeisthebestthatI’veeverhadbecauseofhim.Ireallylovemycompany.Isurrendermyselftohim.Butinfact,howfoolishtogivemylov

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英语翻译
请帮我看看这篇文章的错处,有的地方如果能够改得更深刻、优美的,
Now my life is the best that I’ve ever had because of him.I really love my company.
I surrender myself to him.But in fact,how foolish to give my love to him!He always forces me to make things so complicated,for he doesn’t often tell me the truth.And now my heart has so much misery.
He thinks of me but sometimes he just sees his pain.He said he would never break his promise.But why he still has so many secrets that I don’t know?And it hurts me again and again and kills me inside.
Can he see me dying a little more inside?Can he hear me crying?Can he see my tears?
I just want to know where he is about to go and what he is doing… I just care about him.But he seldom tells me anything.
It is like that he takes a gun and put it to my head.
不用翻译了。
不用翻译了。
不用翻译了。
请给我一些意见。是给我喜欢的人看的。
请给我一些意见。是给我喜欢的人看的。
请给我一些意见。是给我喜欢的人看的。

Answer 1

你的意思和情感已经表达得很清楚了.作为旁观者,我也能体会到你所表达的境况,和情感.如果是真正喜欢你的人,看了应该是会感到伤心和难过,并能体会到你的真情.
有一些小地方,值得注意一下
I really love my company.-- companion伴侣
It is like that he takes a gun and put it to my head?---
是把枪交到我的手里吧?hand
如果要表达,射到我的心里或头上应该是 shoot into my head