请帮手看看这些英文文法对不对?1.IamsuchaheavysleeperthatIcan'tlivewithoutalarmclocks.Idon'twanttooversleepandbelateatschool!2.Idon'tthinkIcandowithoutinstantnoodles.3.Idon'tthinkIcandowithoutmobilepho

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请帮手看看这些英文文法对不对?
1.I am such a heavy sleeper that I can't live without alarm clocks.I don't want to oversleep and be late at school!
2.I don't think I can do without instant noodles.
3.I don't think I can do without mobile phone.It enables us to talk anyone anywhere anytime.
4.I love my dog very much because it is not just a pet ,but also my best friend.
5.It is believed that the idea of instant noodles first originated from China.
6.The history of instant noodles can be traced back nearly 400 years in China.
7.It is very convenient has instant noodles as a meal because it is easy to cook.

Answer 1

1. I'm such a heavy sleeper that without alarm clocks I'll oversleep and be late "for" school, I don't want that. 注：be late for school,还有语序有点小问题.
2. I don't think I can "live" without instant noodles. 不要用do这种没有实际意义的单词.
3. I don't think I can "live" without mobile phone. It enables "me" to talk "with" anyone "no matter where and when". 同上用live,talk后面跟with, anywhere anyone要加连词
4. I love my dog very much, because it is not just a pet, "he is" my best friend.注：but also前面必须有not only,而且这里转折关系没那么强烈,可以直接连接.
5.It is believed that the idea of instant noodles originated from China "at first".语序
6.The history of instant noodles can be traced back to China "400 years ago".语序
7.Instant noodles as a "kind of fast food", is very convenient because it is easy to cook.
语序,还有noodle不能成为meal,只是一种food
修改的都用分号标出来了,望采纳,谢谢