麻烦各位英语高手帮我修改下这篇面试文章,急用在线等!谢谢啊!好的话追加财富值!XXismyfirstchoice.Becauseithasalonghistoryandstrongacademicenvironment,andasthesingletonfemaleIwasdesperatetoreturnm

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麻烦各位英语高手帮我修改下这篇面试文章,急用在线等!谢谢啊!好的话追加财富值!
XX is my first choice. Because it has a long history and strong academic environment, and as the singleton female I was desperate to return my hometown. Can be better prepared to honor my parents, but also to spend more time with my parents around.
I am a diligent student during my college studying, and In my college, I actively response to the call of the college, take part in all kinds of useful activities and get scholarships for many times. I'm quite hard-working, responsible, capable, and outgoing. I spent most of my time on study. And I’ve acquired basic knowledge of my major. I can get along with all kinds of people. That's why i have lots of friends. i'd like to work with the others and make progress in the field that we like. It is my long cherished dream to be a graduate student and I am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.

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XX is my first choice. Because it has a long history and strong academic air.As the only child I was desperate to return to my hometown in order to be convenient to spend more time with my parents who are older and older with time going by.
As far as i am concerned,happiness is not a long distance telephone call,a air ticket during the Spring Festival or a large empty house,but the feeling i feel when the whole family live together and walk with my mother hand in hand in the setting sun as the time when my mother rode me out with her bike in my childhood.
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