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外教老师考试叫我们改错下礼拜交请英语大神帮忙咯,语法,单词等等错误都指出来哦3~5处错误原文:Iwouldprefertoworkinalargecompanyratherthanasmallone.Alargecompanyhasmoretoofferintermsofadvance

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外教老师考试叫我们改错下礼拜交请英语大神帮忙咯,语法,单词等等错误都指出来哦3~5处错误原文:
I would prefer to work in a large company rather than a small one.A large company has more to offer in terms of advancement,training,and prestige.
In a large company,I can start at an entry-level position and work myself up to the top.I could start in the mailroom and,once I know the company,can apply for a managerial position.In a small company,there is not as much room to grow.
In a large company,there are a variety of jobs.I could be trained in a variety of positions and would have valuable experience.In a small company,there would not be the same opportunity.
In a large company,there would be more prestige.I could brag to my friends that I worked for one of the biggest companies in the world.I would always have something to talk about when I met strangers.If I worked in a small company,I would always have to explain what the company did.
Working for a small company would not give me the same opportunities for advancement or no-the-job training as working for a larger company would.Nor would I be as proud to work for a small company---unless the small company was my own.
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I would prefer to work (应该是working) in a large company rather than a small one.
A large company has more to offer in terms of advancement, training, and prestige.
In a large company, I can start at an entry-level position and work myself up to the top.

I could start in the mailroom and, once I know the company, (少主语I)can apply for a managerial position. In a small company, there is not as much room to grow.
In a large company, there are a variety of jobs(这段病句比较严重可以简单改为there is not as much room as in a large company with a variety of jobs).

I could be trained in a variety of positions and would have valuable experience. In a small company, there would not be the same opportunity.

In a large company, there would be more prestige(整句话表达很差可以改为A large company is often more prestigious).

I could brag to my friends that I worked(这里开始用虚拟是可以的) for one of the biggest companies in the world. I would always have something to talk about when I met strangers. If I worked in a small company, I would always have to explain what the company did.
Working for a small company would not give me the same opportunities for advancement or no-the-job training as working for a larger company would(去掉多余的would).

Nor would I be as(as后面没有比较对象去掉多余的as) proud to work(改为of working) for a small company---unless the small company was my own.

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