写了一篇英语作文,请帮忙改下（就是语法等等之类的错误）Inthemorning,Bilgoestoworkbysubway.Heisateacher,heteachesmath.hisclassesareverywonderful.Afterlunch,heisintheofficereadsnewspaper.at5:30,heg

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写了一篇英语作文,请帮忙改下（就是语法等等之类的错误）
In the morning ,Bil goes to work by subway.He is a teacher ,he teaches math .his classes are very wonderful.
After lunch ,he is in the office reads newspaper .at 5:30 ,he goes home .He watches TV in the evening and goes bed at 10.
This is Bill's day
错误的地方请用【】在文中标出,或列在下面,4:00前要!

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In the morning ,Bill goes to work by subway.He is a teacher and he teaches math .His classes are very wonderful.
After lunch ,he is in the office reading newspapers.At 5:30 ,he goes home .He watches TV in the evening and goes to bed at 10.
This is Bill's day !