请高手改下英语作文麻烦各位了,改的清楚一些,让我可以很好的认识到自己错误WelcometoJoininOurClubWelcomeeverystudenttojoininourclub.Ourclubisainterestingclub.Themainofclubiscartoonappreciation.Ou

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请高手改下英语作文
麻烦各位了,改的清楚一些,让我可以很好的认识到自己错误
Welcome to Join in Our Club
Welcome every student to join in our club .Our club is a interesting club .The main of club is cartoon appreciation .
Our club have a long histry.There are a lot of interesting thing wait for you .First ,we often organize everybody watch cartoon .You will enjoy it.Second ,we should organize cosplay one or two times each team.You can play a role of cartoon you like .
If you like cartoon ,come on .You can enter your name in the form and hand in it to student union,If you still have some questions about club ,you can call this numbers .We are welcome you join in us.
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Our club have a long histry.There are a lot of interesting thing wait for 改为：Our club have a long history.There are a lot of interesting things waiting for ；First ,we often organize everybody w...