这段English这样写可以吗In the case,the employee who comes from The Great Britain holds some disagreement on their labor contract; he will be suggested using the negotiation for the settlement of labor dispute.In my opinion,there are seven pro

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这段English这样写可以吗
In the case,the employee who comes from The Great Britain holds some disagreement on their labor contract; he will be suggested using the negotiation for the settlement of labor dispute.In my opinion,there are seven procedures he can use when he decided to use the negotiation to the settlement of conflicts.

Answer 1

第一句：the employee who came(要用过去式) from (没有the) Great Britain.
第一句的后半句改成：he will be suggested to use negotiation for the settlement of labor dispute.
第二局：.when he decided to use (没有the) negotiation to (←同样的问题,不用加the,然后后面改成这样→）settle the conflicts.
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