继续英语题目II.ImprovethefollowingforthebestcommunicativeeffectII.Improvethefollowingforthebestcommunicativeeffect(18points)1).WangPingisajuniorstudentinSchoolofForeignLanguages.Heisfromanunderdevelopedvillagew

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继续英语题目II.Improve the following for the best communicative effect
II.Improve the following for the best communicative effect (1 8 points) 1).Wang Ping is a junior student in School of Foreign Languages.He is from an underdeveloped village which is located in Hunan Province.( 3 points) 2).We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.( 3 points) 3).Li is a new student.He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand his dialect.( 3 points)4).There is an iron pot that was hung over the fire.Bubblings and gurglings came forth out of that pot.There was also a vague suggestive steaminess coming out.( 3 points)5).You must first work out an outline for your paper,and then after you have done that,you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.( 3 points)6).He heard that his father was ill.He was anxious to go home to see him.He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.( 3 points)7).He gave many reasons for the failure,but the reasons he gave were not convincing.( 3 points) 8).This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues.( 3 points) 9).Li is a new student.He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand his dialect.( 3 points)10).Mark Twain is a well-known American writer.His experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.( 3 points)

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1.As a junior student in the School of Foreign Languages,Wang Ping is from an underdeveloped village in Hunan Province.2.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the crowded busy shoe shop with all kinds of reasonable priced shoes on the shelves.3.Li is a new student from a southern province and he speaks a dialect which is hard to understand.4.The soup was boiling in the iron pot that was hung over the fire.5.You need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view after you have worked out an outline for your paper.6.He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket because he was anxious to go home after learning his father was ill.7.He gave many unconvincing reasons for the failure.8.The old engineer collaborated with some of his younger colleagues and jointly designed this machine.9.Mark Twain’s experience as a pilot on a steamboat was definitely an important factor that helped him to become a famous American writer.10.She grew up in Donora which is located in the valley of the hills of western Pennsylvania where everybody relied on the local steel mill for their living.11.The train slithered along a grassy hillside and passed a strip of gravel on which we saw some orange-helmeted workers were sitting and reading newspapers.12.I am a senior student in the English Department and I come from an underdeveloped village in Shanxi Province.13.As the largest market in the world,China has attracted investments from thousands of multi-national companies over the past two decades,resulting in the setting up of numerous joint ventures.14.Close to 100 water-color paintings created by the magical,bold brushes of promising young artists are here on display.15.同第四题.16.Like a giant standing on top of a mountain,this pine tree was towering over the other trees in the vicinity.17.Smith had several months of sleepless nights after his house had been burglarized.