将英语写话延伸~LastWinterHolidayLastwinter,IwenttoJiangsu.Theweatherwasbad.Itwassnowy.Ididn'tlikethefoodthere.Itwasyucky.Ididalotofthingsinwinter.Iwenttomuseumsandsawmanyinterestingthings.Iwrotealettertomy

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将英语写话延伸~
Last Winter Holiday
Last winter,I went to Jiangsu.The weather was bad.It was snowy.I didn't like the food there.It was yucky.I did a lot of things in winter.I went to museums and saw many interesting things.I wrote a letter to my friend.It was very happy.
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又是你~帮你改了些错误（也不算是啦,指示句子的形式）
Last Winter Holiday
I went to Jiangsu last winter and the weather was bad and snowy.The food wasn't delicious to me,and it tasted yucky.I did a lot of things in winter,such as going to museums,and going around.There were many interesting things.The trip was really excited so I wrote to my friend.
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