谁帮我参考一下这篇文字语法等等问题怎么样Hi,mynameis王轶祈.I'm14yearsold,I’mstudyatkunmingHendersongaoxinNO.1highschool.IlovemusicverymuchandIlikesinging.Ialsoliketoplaybasketball,andIcanplayit

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谁帮我参考一下这篇文字语法等等问题怎么样
Hi,my name is 王轶祈.I'm 14 years old,I’m study at kunming Henderson gaoxin NO.1 high school.I love music very much and I like singing .I also like to play basketball,and I can play it well.Apart from that,I also like to reading and writing.They both give me a lot of fun and build my unique personality as well as my goal and dream.I like 林俊杰 very much.he could be my favorite singer.Personally,I've been considering I have a really complicated personality because sometimes don't really like to study,sometimes.However,I'm very positive and look forwards to my future because I'm the one who will realize my goal.

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I also like to reading and writing.－like to do,这边后面要动词原型.he could be my favorite singer－为什么用could 如果他是你最喜欢的歌手,就是 is,could感觉虚拟了.“They both give me a lot of fun and bui...