SAT语法求助1.Thoughbestknownasajazzvocalist,healsoenjoyedgospelmusic,wherebyhetoldhismanagerthathewantedtomakearecordingofhisfavoritegospelsongs.这个whereby哪里错了?2.In1850Jim,ablackAmericanexplorer,discovere

Question

SAT语法求助
1.Though best known as a jazz vocalist,he also enjoyed gospel music,whereby he told his manager that he wanted to make a recording of his favorite gospel songs.
这个whereby哪里错了?
2.In 1850 Jim,a black American explorer,discovered in the mountains of the Sierra Nevads a pass soon becoming an important gateway to California gold-rush country.
这里soon becoming错了,要怎么改?
3.As a student becomes familiar with both early and contemporary American literature,one may notice that traditional stories have influence recent ones.
逗号后面的one错了,怎么改?
4.John is regarded to be one of most talented writers of the late twentieth century.
这里?to be 错了,为什么?

Answer 1

1 whereby在sat中相当于by which 放在这语意不通 2 从句时态错误 改成which soon became 3 one指代不清 sat惯用考点 4 sat默认be regard as 不是to be