请问这篇作文还能过6分及格线吗?（英语很烂）Inthepresent,theinternetexistsinourlifemoreandmore,whichcansupplyusaapproachofcontactingwitheachother,withquickeningdevelopingsociety,theinternetwillbemorecompr

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请问这篇作文还能过6分及格线吗?（英语很烂）
In the present,the internet exists in our life more and more,which can supply us a approach of contacting with each other,with quickening developing society,the internet will be more comprehensively used by people.
Although internet enable us to contact with each other easily,which makes us not be able to get the chance of face-to-face with our friends,it goes without saying that depending on internet can't contribute us to get better contact with our friends and some strangers
So,obviously,we should break the habit of expressively（写错） depending on competer（拼错）,by doing which can us get more chances of face -to-face with our friends,and enable us to get more friendship.
还有我把面对面这形容词当成名词用了两次.



5-7分,2/3句子有错,表达不清楚.连贯差
8-10分,1/3的句子有错,部分地方表达不清楚,勉强连贯

Answer 1

5-6分左右