well-known sport did by everybody .we all suggested that doing some sports or'' people sporting''.because sport is very important for a country.nowadays many people think that sport stars are attracting too much pulic attention earning too much money

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well-known sport did by everybody .we all suggested that doing some sports or'' people sporting''.
because sport is very important for a country.nowadays many people think that sport stars are attracting too much pulic attention earning too much money .
in my opinion they are well desered.
firstly athletes reprensent a country as well as a goodwill ambassdors when they take part in international affairs.they will play important roles
老师请点评这是我刚刚写的关于运动员收入引起人们的非议

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第一句 well-known sports did by everybody 我希望这只是title 不然的话请修改
what is people sporting? its too chinglish.
还有就是你前面两句话和后面的主题没什么大关系
好吧 我帮你改写一下你再看看
Sports
We have all been suggested to do some hours of exercise weekly. Exercise and sports are very important for the well being of our body.
无关紧要的两句话我还是帮你改写了... =_=
Now a days many people think that sport stars are attracting too much public attention and earning too much money. In my opinion, their salary is well deserved. Athletes represent a country as well as goodwill ambassdors when they take part in international affairs.
虽然我不认同你的观点 但是改写就这样吧.