有几个gmat语法题,希望NN们帮我看看.NotoneofthepotentialinvestorsisexpectedtomakeanoffertobuyFirstInterstateBankuntilamergeragreementissignedthatincludesaprovisionforpenaltiesifthedealwerenottobeconclude

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有几个gmat语法题,希望NN们帮我看看.
Not one of the potential investors is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were not to be concluded.
A.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement is signed that includes a provision for penalties if the deal were
B.is expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal was
C.is expected to make an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until a merger agreement be signed by them with a provision for penalties if the deal were
D.are expected to make an offer for buying First Interstate Bank until it signs a merger agreement with a provision for penalties included if the deal was
E.are expected to be making an offer to buy First Interstate Bank until they sign a merger agreement including a provision for penalties if the deal were
C是正确答案,可是B哪里错了啊
NASA’s methodical approach to the exploration of Mars has not yet answered the questions of whether biological life forms ever emerged on Mars and whether,presuming such life forms having left fossil traces to begin with,those traces can still exist in some moist recesses of the cold and arid planet.
A.and whether,presuming such life forms having left fossil traces to begin with,those traces can
B.and whether,if it is presumed that such life forms left some fossil traces to begin with,can those traces
C.and whether,presuming such life forms left fossil traces to begin with,those traces
D.and,presuming such life forms did leave some fossil traces to begin with,if they can
E.and,presuming such life forms to have left fossil traces to begin with,if they
c错在哪里?
Most insomnia is not an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications,anxiety about travel,or stress before a job interview.
A.an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications
B.an illness or a physical condition so much as symptomatic of another problem that may be a simple one,like a reaction caused by certain medications
C.so much an illness or a physical condition but a symptom of another problem that may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction
D.so much an illness or a physical condition,but it is a symptom of another problem,maybe a simple one like certain medications causing a reaction
E.so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem,maybe simply a reaction to certain medications
但是 E.C错在哪里
还有图片里的那个题,which就近指代,那指人?意思也不对啊

Answer 1

CD论坛乌烟瘴气的.
首先你要明白SC考的是什么.
我们都知道SC其实就是改错题.那么改错题的话就可以分为两种.一种是我们高考英语和SAT的改错题,错误明显,很简单,很多都是词性错误之类的低级语法错误；另一种是gmat的改错题,通常为语意或者逻辑意思有误,甚至是要达到吹毛求疵的简洁等等.
明白了这个道理之后,你在做gmat改错题的“原则”应该只有一个,则【在语意即逻辑正确的前提下选择更为简洁的句子】作为正确答案.永远要记住,题目做对即可,不要去研究某个选项为什么对,某个选项为什么错.因为在上述前提之下,【正确选项可能只是比另外四个选项更好罢了】.在gmat考试中,切忌追求完美!
下面简单讲一下你问的题目,水平有限,且当是切磋一下吧.
第一题：
ABC选项类似,DE选项类似,所以分开看.二者最大区别是句首的is和are,于是比较此处.发现none one所以用is,排除DE；ABC中,A的that指代有问题,排除；B中if the deal was错误,此处表示与事实不同的推测必须用were.建议去听听Beyonce的if i were a boy（她不可能变成男的,所以必须用if i were a boy）.这是高中语法知识.
另外美剧电影中可常见if i were you之类的表达方式.
第二题：
关于情态动词的添加可以看英吉或者黄大仙的帖子,他们讨论过,这里就不说了.“情态动词通常不能改”这也是一个归纳性的错误.现实考试中的确也出现了删除情态动词的正确选项.
这里只说一点,前面的having和这个情态动词can一旦去掉,你认为句意发生变化了吗?如果句意变了,A和C到底哪个更通顺更符合逻辑更能让人明白.要注意的一点是,通常大家认为“having必错”,这存在且只存在于当句子用了having和没用是一样的,甚至是错误的.
第三题：
平行结构的意义是“语意上的平行”,就是说前后平行的对象必须一致.退一步而言,即使此处的平行你没读出来,当你看到that从句时也应该想一想C选项中may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction到底修饰的是什么.根据句意可以清楚的发现maybe simply a reaction to certain medications是修饰Most insomnia的.因此E为正确选项.
图片：
= =首先你把which前面的句子翻译过来看看,应该是“Emily给Susan的信”吧.宾语后的which不能指代主语（指动词宾语,which不能跳跃谓语动词）.所以这里用which是可以的.
其实我这里先要说一点,就是从语法上讲,A选项并没有错.但是gmat考的是逻辑意思.A选项句子重心为“信的时间段”,E选项句子重心为“信（的数量）”.而这里作者想要强调的的的确确是“信的数量比她给任何一个人在这段时间里写的信都要多”.所以E比A要好.
大概就是这样了.总的来说,只有一句话：逻辑意思是秒杀一切SC题目的法宝.
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