麻烦指出这段话中的错误,TherearesevenpeopleinSharon’sfamily.Buttherewereonlythreebedrooms…soshehavenoownsingleroomuntil15years.WangQianggetownroomwhenheis12yearsbecausehissister,aneldersistergotmarry

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麻烦指出这段话中的错误,
There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were only three bedrooms…so she have no own single room until 15 years.
Wang Qiang get own room when he is 12 years because his sister ,an elder sister got marry.
He was very happy and wrote in his diary.
Sharon think children should early own single room,evening a baby.Because it makes people feel more independent.Wang Qiang agree with her and say that’s a neat idea.

Answer 1

There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were(are) only three bedrooms…so she have(had) no(加her) own single room until 15 years(后面加old).
Wang Qiang get(got)(加his) own room when he is (was)12 years(加old) because his sister ,an elder sister got marry(married).
He was very happy and wrote in his diary.
Sharon think(thinks) children should early own(加their own) single room,evening(even) a baby.Because it makes people feel(去掉feel) more independent.Wang Qiang agree(agrees) with her and say(says) that’s a neat idea.