ThisismyfirsttimetowriteanEnglishe-mail.IcameacrossyourmagazineabouttwomonthsbeforeandIloveditfromthefirstmoment.…………

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This is my first time to write an English e-mail.I came across your magazine about two months before and I loved it from the first moment.…………

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楼主为什么不把全文打出来呢?请补充问题吧.
改正如下（错误在括号处注明）：
This is my first time to write an English e-mail.I came across your magazine about two months (before改成ago) and I loved it from the first moment...
about two months before这种结构是指从过去某一时刻往前推算大约两个月,其做时间状语的句子的时态只能使用过去完成时,而不能使用一般过去时.
所以,必须把before改成ago.
about two months ago是指从现在往前推算大约两个月,句子必须使用一般过去时.