转为过去式Todayisthecloudyday,Johnreadytogoout,heconvenientlytookaumbrella,outonthestreetsafter,rain,Johnsawinfronthaveagrandpa,immediatelytoaccordingtograndpa,grandpawasmoved.今天是阴天,约翰准备出门,他顺

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Today is the cloudy day,John ready to go out,he conveniently took a umbrella,out on the streets after,rain,John saw in front have a grandpa,immediately to according to grandpa,grandpa was moved.
今天是阴天,约翰准备出门,他顺手拿了一把伞,走到大街上以后,突然下起了雨,约翰看见前面有一个老爷爷,就立刻上前去为老爷爷打伞,老爷爷很感动

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That day was a cloudy day,John was ready to go out,he conveniently took an umbrella,and out on the streets after,raining,John saw a grandpa infront of him,immediately to according to grandpa,grandpa was moved.
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