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帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!
My hobby
Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.
I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of time on playing with computers.When I was very young,I didn't think listening to music was interesting,because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.
But I've changed now.I enjoy music very much.Mainly is the classical music.
Music is sometimes called a universal language.A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride,exaltation and despair,peace and mystery through his music.Hope everybody can and I share the classical music
其实我很想把悬赏分给大家,但是没办法,他给我的帮助多一些,所以我给他了,抱歉
My hobby
Two years ago,I didn't like music.It should be said is not like it very much.
I had plenty of time,but I spent lots of time on playing with computers.When I was very young,I didn't think listening to music was interesting,because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.
But I've changed now.I enjoy music very much.Mainly is the classical music.
Music is sometimes called a universal language.A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride,exaltation and despair,peace and mystery through his music.Hope everybody can and I share the classical music
其实我很想把悬赏分给大家,但是没办法,他给我的帮助多一些,所以我给他了,抱歉
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You should correct the following sentences like this:
It should be said.______I should say I didn't like it very much.
playing with computers---------playing computers
the computer games------computer games
Mainly.--------- ,especially classical music.
Hope.-------- I hope everybody can share the happiness of listening to classical music.
It should be said.______I should say I didn't like it very much.
playing with computers---------playing computers
the computer games------computer games
Mainly.--------- ,especially classical music.
Hope.-------- I hope everybody can share the happiness of listening to classical music.
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