YesterdayIwenttoseemychildhoodfriendsLiGangandinvitedtohavelunchathishome.Atthetable,LiGangcomplainedwhatthedisheswerenotdelicious,buttalkedtohisparentsimpolitely.Healsoaskedthemfor500yuan.Itwassuchmuchmoney

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Yesterday I went to see my childhood friends Li Gang and invited to have lunch at his home.At the table,Li Gang complained what the dishes were not delicious,but talked to his parents impolitely.He also asked them for 500 yuan.It was such much money that his parents refused.Li Gang became very angrily.I felt very uncomfortable and found the excuse to leave.When I returned to home,I wrote him a letter.I tell him he should respect his parents and never behave like that.I hope she will follow my advice.
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Answer 1

1 invited 前加 was
2what 改为 that
3 but 改为 and
4 such改为 so
5 angrily 改为 angry
6found the excuse 改为 found an excuse
7 returned to 去掉to
8 i tell him 改为 I told him
9she 改为 he
10 follow 改为 accept