刚刚写给妹妹的英文信,她上大一~Dearsister:HowareyougettingonIhaven'tseenyouforagesandImissedyouverymuchbutyouarestillinthebottomofmyheartandyouYoubecameacollegestudentatauniversityingrade1nowhow

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刚刚写给妹妹的英文信,她上大一~
Dear sister:
How are you getting on I haven't seen you for ages and I missed you very much but you are still in the bottom of my heart and you
You became a college student at a university in grade 1 now how about you life of college?And How about yourleft during this one year how time flies,I am already 22 years old.
A few of my friends who was study at a university in grade 4 now,
And ready for their job~etc…
Tell you a good new I’ll to be a junior college student in september the first ,because I can’t find a better job ,receive far more money
So I plans keep to study in the evening
You’ll write me in english ,right?And you was told me that you’ll choice a english speciality for you study.what about you?Did you have something that you would like to share with me?Just like before you told me everying in a letter .If you are free please reply me as soon as possible because I'm eager to hear from you.Please keep contact with me,my sister~
Wish the best
Philip 07 /03 /17

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Dear sister:
How are you doing?I haven't seen you for years and I miss you very much but you are still at the bottom of my heart
You are now an university student!How about you life in university?And how were you this year?How time flies,I am already 22 years old.
A few of my friends who are studying in universities are now in Grade 4.And they're ready for their job~
I want to tell you a good news!I’ll become a junior college student in September,because I can’t find a better job ,or earn much money.
So I plan to keep studying during the evenings.
You’ll write to me in English ,right?And you told me that you’ll choose an English speciality for your study.So now I've told you about my life.What about yours?Do you have something that you would like to share with me?Just like before you told me everying in your letters.If you have time please reply write me back asap because I'm eager to hear from you.Please let's keep in touch!
Best wishes!
Philip 07 /03 /17
好了~现在这封信应该没有语法或者拼词错误了~我把能改的都改了~
你的姐姐还是妹妹啊~真幸福啊~还有个哥哥常常给她写信~