英语改错,大小写不要注意,yesterdayiwasgonehomebythebusandmyfatherwasgoingtopickme.Onethebus,Iseeayoungwomanwithseveralbagsodheavierbooksgeton.Iwantedtoofferhermyseat,andIdid'nInmysurprise,sheandIgot

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英语改错,大小写不要注意,yesterday i was gone home by the bus and my father was going to pick me.One the bus,Isee a young woman with several bags od heavier books get on.I wanted to offer her my seat,and I did'n In my surprise,she and I got off at the same stations later.After a short conversation,I learned ahe had to walk a long way home.So Ioffered give her a ride and she accepted.When thinking of this experience,I was that she didn't do the right thing the first time on the bus.But I was very happy to have a second chance to doing it.

Answer 1

第一行,gone改为going,the去掉
二,see改为saw
三,didn't改为did,In改为To,stations末尾s去掉
四,learned后加that,way后加to,give去掉
五,was与that之间少了个单词,无法准确了解语义
六,doing改为do
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