求改英语作文,求狠批!Atpresentmanypeoplearenothappy.theyfacemanypressuresuchasjobstudy.Andtherearemanyparticularreasonsleadthemunhappysuchaswarhungrydisasteretc.Ontheonehanditisaquestiontodealwiththeprob

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求改英语作文,求狠批!
At present many people are not happy.they face many pressure such as job study.And there are many particular reasons lead them unhappy such as war hungry disaster etc.On the one hand it is a question to deal with the problem we face.On the other hand we absent of this abilities.So whant we can do to be happy.There are several ways you can read.First we can read the books that we are interested.When we read the book we can enjoy the fun of reading.And forget our trouble.Next we can invit some friends to communicate with .Comunicating with friends not only can we enjoy the lesute time but also learn the intelligient from our friends.Last but not least you can do something of your interest such as chess travel ect.The feeling of happiness is by our heart Heart disese will cure by heart medicine.So learn to put on you can gain something.

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稍微改了下,但最后一句还是看不懂,没改.
At present many people are not happy as they are facing many pressures such as job and studying.And there are many particular reasons that can also lead them unhappy,such as war,hungry,disaster,etc.On the one hand it is a question to deal with the problem we face.On the other hand we are absent of this abilities.So what can we do to be happy?There are several ways you can read.First we can read the books that we are interested.When we read the book we can enjoy the fun of reading and forget our trouble.Next we can invite some friends to communicate with.Communicating with friends not only can we enjoy the leisure time but also learn the intelligence from our friends.Last but not least you can do something of your interest such as chess,travel,etc.The feeling of happiness is by our heart.Heart disease will be cured only by heart medicine.So learn to put on you can gain something.