几个简单的英语句子纠错!1.对于那些盲人,过马路是很危险的,因为那些红绿灯没有声音去提醒他们.fortheblindperson,it'sdangeroustocrosstheroad,becausethetrafficlightwasnovoicetowarmthem.2.对于那些

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几个简单的英语句子纠错!
1.对于那些盲人,过马路是很危险的,因为那些红绿灯没有声音去提醒他们.
for the blind person,it's dangerous to cross the road,because the traffic light was no voice to warm them.
2.对于那些坐轮椅的人,他们不能像正常人一样搭公交车.
for the people in wheelchairs,they can't like the normal person to take the bus.
只要看看英语翻得有没错.最好帮我改正一下,

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两句中的person都可以去掉,道理同“the rich”“the poor”,都是the+形容词表一类人的用法.
另外,because the traffic light was no voice to warm them.应该改成：because the traffic lights have no voice to warn them
原因：红绿灯用单复数可能问题都不大,但个人认为复数比较好.而warm是温暖的意思；warn才是警告的意思.没有声音应该翻译成“have no voice”因为此处已经用了拟人的修辞了,把红绿灯拟人化,所以要用“have”的“有”而不是“be”的“有”
最后,你的第一句原句语序有些别扭,虽然语法上没问题,但调整一下会比较好：
It is very dangerous for the blind to cross the road because the traffic lights have no voice to warn them.
第二句除了“person”去掉,其他的没有问题.
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