下面是老师指出的错误,但是我不知道怎么错了,要不又要被骂了TTWhenwearrivedtheHuangshan,wewereexcitedandstartedtoclimbamountain.这句老师说arrived错了,怎么错了?Halfwayupthemountain,wegottorest,becau

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下面是老师指出的错误,但是我不知道怎么错了,要不又要被骂了T T
When we arrived the Huangshan,we were excited and started to climb a mountain.
这句老师说arrived错了,怎么错了?
Halfway up the mountain,we got to rest,because we climbed very tired and hungry.这句是后半句的 tired 和 hungry.
A lot of restaurant are far from our community,which led me to spend one-hour to go to take the subway arriving some restaurant and came back in the same way.
这句是arriving,这里不能用这样么?还有came back.

Answer 1

arrive是不及物动词 所以需要加介词 at 或in
tired和hungry是形容词 而修饰climb动词 需要副词 而且意思不对 没有说饥饿劳累的爬,只有爬到又累又饿 应该写作we were too tired and hungry to climb
take the subway的目的是去饭店 应该用 to arrive at 别忘记介词 came 应该换作come 这里他与take 并列
to go 多余