假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一 个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写 出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

   I strong recommend that physical activities in children are encouraged. Parents who are supposed to make sure that their children get some form of exercise one hour daily because exercise is better for character building. When this comes to exercise many people end up picturing heavy exercise at the gym. As matter of fact exercise for children can mean going out and having funs. For example they can walk or cycle to nearby places instead of take a bus. They can take their dogs out for 15-minute walks twice a day.Beside children should be encouraged to make new friends for whom they can actively play sports.

Answer 1

1. I strong recommend ...   strong→strongly2. . .. children are encouraged.   are→be3. Parents who are…    去掉 who4. . .. exercise is better for...   better→good5. When this comes to ...   this→it6. As matter of fact ...   As 后加 a7. . .. and having funs.   funs→ fun8. . .. take a bus.   take→taking9. Beside children should ....   Beside→Besides   10. …for whom they can ...   for→with