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My dream school stars at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and tuo in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with arter-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour everyday.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are king and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

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My dream school stars at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They（改There） are three lessons in the morning and tuo（这个是two吧?打错了?） in the afternoon.We didn't（改don't） need to do so many（改much） homework.Therefore,we have more time with（改for） arter（这个又是打错吧after）-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour（改hours） and play sport for one hour everyday.My dream school look(改looks) like a big garden.There are all kinds of the(去掉the) flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat(改sitting) by the lake listening (加to）music.The teachers here are king and helpfully（改helpful）.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.