请问我这篇英文作文有病句吗?麻烦帮我修改修改好嘛?Goodmorning.TodayIwanttotellyouaboutmyfavouriteholiday,MyfavouriteholidayisTheSpringFestival.Iliveitbecausereceiveredpackets.Theweatheriscoldbutissunny

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请问我这篇英文作文有病句吗?麻烦帮我修改修改好嘛?
Good morning.Today I want to tell you about my favourite holiday,My favourite holiday is The Spring Festival.I live it because receive red packets.The weather is cold but is sunny too.There are like New year cake.In The Spring Festval.Iwill things to do sprcial purchases for The Spring Festival with my parents.Next,Ivisit my relativas and friends.Inthe evening,Ihave dinner with my parents.Next,I will things to see the flowers in the flower market.Lost,I places visit is Victoria Relativas.Because I want to see the firevoorks.So,this is my favourite holiday,

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I live it because receive red packets .这句有语法错.because 是个连词,后面要跟上句子、改为：I love it because i will receive red packets which I'am interested in.
The weather is cold but is sunny too.这句十分中式,英文看来十分矛盾.删了它
There are like New year cake.这句也有问题,不知所云 There be 句型是这里有的意思
In The Spring Festval.Iwill things to do sprcial purchases for The Spring Festival with my parents.这句话语法有误,整句话都没有动词来做谓语.In The Spring Festval,I am eager to purchase a variety of special things with my parents in the morning
Next,I will things to see the flowers in the flower market..理由同上,而且太多next ,改为：Then ,I am able to see the flowers in the garden .
Lost,I places visit is Victoria Relativas..这句话依旧不知所云.
那个顺便问一下：你是小学生还是初中生?