帮我看看这篇自我介绍.MynameisSharon.IgraduatedfromGuangzhouRailwayNo.2MiddleSchool.Ilikeeating,eatingfoodissofunthatIthinkit'sthemostwonderfulthingintheworld.Ibelieve,impossibleisnothing.Thethingis,sureyou

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帮我看看这篇自我介绍.
My name is Sharon.I graduated from Guangzhou Railway No.2 Middle School.I like eating,eating food is so fun that I think it's the most wonderful thing in the world.I believe,impossible is nothing.The thing is ,sure you can.
最后一句就是说，只要相信自己，没有什么不可能，

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My name is Sharon.I graduated from Guangzhou Railway No.2 Middle School.I like eating.Eating food is so funny that I think it's the most wonderful thing in the world.I believe nothing is impossible,only if you believe in yourself!
帮你改了下语法错误.
这样就行了.
晕,楼上的,谁跟你说的.
主语是人时,believe表示相信我能做什么事,后面跟具体的事,而表示相信自己,就是believe in.学校名字不用改,是铁路二中,不是铁路上的第二中学,楼主是对的.
楼主,你要相信谁随便你罗~