帮忙看下这句英文有没有什么错误However,asscienceandtechnologygetingaccumulatedpeoplefromChinafeelobligedtomakeprogressofself-diathesis,fortheworldinprogress.主要用As...,for...的写法.原文是：随着科技的

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帮忙看下这句英文有没有什么错误
However,as science and technology geting accumulated people from China feel obliged to make progress of self-diathesis,for the world in progress.主要用As...,for...的写法.
原文是：随着科技的不断站,国民感到必须提升自我素质,因为世界在进步.
我想请教下：还有什么更好的写法吗?

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With technology constantly changing and improving,and the world is always in progressing,people from China find that it is necessary for them to improve themselves.
As technology is constantly changing and improving,our people find that there is a need for them to improve their self-qualities,for the world is always in progressed.