求修改英语作文1,有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,2,有些人,喜欢经常换工作是因为3,我的看法MYviewinjobhoppingNowadays,differentkindofjobcanbechoosedbypeopleandmanyofthemholdajobforalongtimes,Foro

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求修改英语作文
1,有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,
2,有些人 ,喜欢经常换工作是因为
3,我的看法
MY view in job hopping
Nowadays,different kind of job can be choosed by people and many of them hold a job for a long times,For one thing ,they think ,stay a job for long times they can get many experiences which are benific to doing one work best .For another ,in a competing society,it is not easy to find a good job .Last but not least,the more times you work job ,the more well-paid job oppitunities you can get .
Somepeople,however,they have different attitude that they often change job,First,they said woking at one place for a long time ,they will lose interested in woking .What's more ,some young people argue that they have more time to finding the best job for themseleves.so they change their job .Finally,woking in different job can hozison their visions.
As far as i am concered ,i am in favor of people shouldn't change the woke very often bacause if the can put their heart in one work ,no matter whatever work they have the will do the best in the woke,and have a wonderful life in the future.

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Nowadays,different kind of job can be choosed by people and many of them hold a job for a long times,
kinds,a long time.many of them的them 从第一句话来看指的是different kind of job,要改下
For one thing ,they think ,stay a job for long times they can get many experiences which are benific to doing one work best
time,benefit to do,整个句子不通,work 不可数,用one job好些
不想改了..几乎每句话都有错误啊...