短文改错NewYear'sDayiscoming.TracydecidedtooranizeapartyonThursday.Butnextday,therewouldhaveatest.SoherfriendAmandatoldher,"Ifyouwillhavethepartytomorrow,halftheclasswon'tcome,becausethestudentsmuststudytothe

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New Year's Day is coming.Tracy decided to oranize a party on Thursday.But next day,there would have a test.So her friend Amanda told her,"If you will have the party tomorrow,half the class won't come,because the students must study to the test."So at last,they had the party on Saturday evening.Before the party ,Tracy wanted her classmates remember the rules for the party."Don't bring food to the party.If you do,the teacher will take it away.Don't late for the party.If you want,you should bring some flowers with you.I hope we'll have great time.
10个错的地方！

Answer 1

正确答案：1。“New Year's Day is coming”中“is”改成“was”（从全文看，应该用过去式）
2。“But next day,there would have a test”中“have”改成“be”（从后文的情节知，此处强调客观事实并非动作）
3。“If you will have the party tomorrow”中去掉“will”（条件状语从句应该用陈述语气）
4。“because the students must study to the test”中“to”改成“for”（此处表达的意思应该是为了考试而去学习，以便备考，从而“to”不恰当）
5。“Tracy wanted her classmates remember the rules for the party”中classmates和remember之间加“to”(此处考察want sb to do sth的结构）
6。“If you do,the teacher will take it away”中“it”改成“them”（从文章看，这里的食物应该是复数的，纵然单复数同形）
7。“Don't late for the party”中在Don't和late中间加be（此处考察be late for的常用固定结构）
8。“I hope we'll have great time. ”中have和great之间加a(此处考察have a good time的常用固定结构）
9。“So at last,they had the party on Saturday evening”中on和Saturday之间加the（应该是特定的某个周六，并非泛指）
10。“If you want,you should bring some flowers with you”中“want”改成“would”（此处应该用虚拟语气，表示对未发生的事情的假设）