英语作文改,病了,能交就行了.(2)Third,Barack-ObamastartedtotalkaboutthesituationoftheUnitedStates.Atthebeginninghegavethebelieftotheaudience,"Ipromiseyou,weasapeoplewillgetthere.(TheIndependent)”Obamaletthe

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英语作文改,病了,能交就行了.(2)
Third,Barack-Obama started to talk about the situation of the United States.At the beginning he gave the belief to the audience,"I promise you,we as a people will get there.(The Independent)” Obama let the audience believe that he is suitable and able for the chair of American.Then he told the audience about the bad situation of United States."But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face.(The Independent)” He deeply said about the economic crisis,the damage from the war,the immigration family and dissatisfied of people.In this part,deeply announcement could let people understand the heavy pressure from Obama.People’s attitude would change.They would feel sympathy to Obama.In fact,the affective dimension could help Obama continue his speech.
However,Obama started to change his attitude in his speech.He started to pick up the hero’s history to compare his situation.By taking about the example of 1930s economics in United States,Obama showed audience an opinion.”This economic situation is bad,but it’s not the situation we have never met.” Obama wanted people to face to this situation and encourage them.
At last,he started to give people a new belief and improved the atmosphere.He said” This is our chance to answer that call.This is our moment.Yes,we can.” He enthuse audience.In addition,people could accept his new policy “Change” by his speech.
Obama’s speeches are the good examples of the politician’s speeches.In fact,the politicians have many skills to build bonds with the audience.First,a good politician knows people’s values and believes.They often do some researches to those particular groups,and then they can decide what they could talk in the speeches.Second,a successful speaker should talk the thing which audiences feel interesting or feel enthusiastic.Even a politician try to announce a boring thing,they also have to relate interesting things to attract people’s attention.Third,politicians can not only use their views to announce the policies.They always use common people’s view and value to describe the things.It can show how considerable politicians are,and it also can attract people to think about politicians’ speech.

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1.He stressed his faith to the audience (he gave the belief to the audience,感觉不地道··)2.He deeply analyzed of the economic crisis（应该是分析或是解说了,said 太口语化）3.the damage from the war,th...