帮忙看看这段文字的错误.,.Heisfamous,hecanplaymusic,singanddanceverygood,hecantellinterestingstories.Hedoesn'tsmokeanddrink,hestaysathomeintheeveningandstopstalkwhenI'mtiredoflistening.

Question

帮忙看看这段文字的错误.,.
He is famous,he can play music,sing and dance very good,he can tell interesting stories.He doesn't smoke and drink,he stays at home in the evening and stops talk when I'm tired of listening.

Answer 1

He is famous.He can play music,sing and dance very well(修饰动词要用副词,而不是形容词),he can tell interesting stories.He doesn't smoke or(否定句里AND应该改成OR) drink.he stays at home in the evening and stops talking(STOP DOING固定搭配,停止做某事) when I'm tired of listening.