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请帮我英语批改作文Everyonehashobby.Everyon~shobbydoesn~tdifferent.Ihaveahobby,too.myhobbyiscollectingoldcoins.ithinkcollectoldcoinsitisveryinteresting.ihavebeencollectingoldcoinsthreeandahalfyears.nowihave

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Everyone has hobby .Everyon~s hobby doesn~t different.I have a hobby ,too .my hobby is collecting old coins.i think collect old coins it is very interesting.i have been collecting old coins three and a half years.now i have 200 of them .collecting old coins make me very happy .i would like to start an old coins~club.
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Everyone has hobbies and hobbies are different for everyone.I do have one hobby,too,which is colllecting old coins.I think it is interesting to collect the old coins and I have been doing this for three and half years already.By now I have collected 200 of old coins.Collecting of old coins makes me really happy and I am thinking to initiate an "old coins collection" club.
收集旧币的英文形态出现太多次,必须有意的转变为代词,句子才不会冗长.