帮忙进行英语改错Hi!Hello,everyone.Iamverygladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisXuJinghan,fromGuizhou,Guiyang,16yearsoldthisyear,fromGuizhouCountyofGuidingprovince.Therearefourpeopleatho

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帮忙进行英语改错
Hi!Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is Xu Jinghan,from Guizhou,Guiyang,16 years old this year,from Guizhou County of Guiding province.There are four people at home,father,mother,sister and me,we love each other,and happy life.I love singing though don't sing well but they like on the line,I have many shortcomings,but I believe I will correct these shortcomings.I am very honored to have the opportunity to introduce myself to you,also hope to succeed in a job interview today.Thank you very much
这是中文：我很高兴能来到这里面试.首先让我介绍一下我自己.我叫徐镜涵,来自贵州贵阳,今年16岁,来自贵州省贵定县.家里有四口人,爸爸,妈妈,姐姐和我,我们都很爱彼此,并且生活的很快乐.我很爱唱歌虽然唱的不好听但是自己喜欢就行,我这个人有许多缺点,但我相信我以后一定会改正这些缺点.我很荣幸有机会向您介绍自己,也希望今天能够面试成功.
有不好的地方也麻烦大家帮忙修改一下了

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Hello,everyone.I am very glad to be here for this interview.First,allowed me introduce myself.My name is Xu Jinghan.I'm from Guiyang,I'm sixteen.There are four people in my family.My parents,sister and I.We love each other.And we are happy in my life.I love singing.But don't sing good.I think I love my songs is good.I have lots of shortcomings.But I believe I can correct it.I am very honored introduce myself to youHowever,hope I can interview today.Thank you for your listening.
改好了,你是不是有的百度翻译的,有很多地方都没有主语,都不是一个完整的句子,以后尽量自己写,写多了就会了,里面有一些句子我把你的原句给你改了一下,但是还是原来的意思!希望可以帮到你!