英语句子改错Firstly,manystudentsareaddictedtocomputergames,thosewhospendsomuchtimeonitnotonlyinfluencetheirstudy,butalsoseriouslydamagetheirhealthbothinphysicalandmental.

Question

英语句子改错
Firstly,many students are addicted to computer games,those who spend so much time on it not only influence their study,but also seriously damage their health both in physical and mental.

Answer 1

Firstly,many students are addicted to computer games,those who spend so much time on it not only influence their study,but also seriously damage their health both in physical and mental.
【改错】Firstly,many students are addicted to computer games.这句是对的,可以直接句号结尾.
those who spend so much time on it not only influence their study这句有点问题,主语不对,花时间打游戏影响学习,而不是他们影响,可以改为Spending so much time on it on only influences their study,but also damages...