英文求大侠帮忙修改：邀请函的句子语法错误之类的.WeareinvitingMr.SadriYazgicfromAA,AssemblerofTechnicalDepartment.HewillattendsometechnicalinstallationworkontheBeijingBenzAutomotiveCo.,Ltd.TheBeijingBen

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英文求大侠帮忙修改：邀请函的句子语法错误之类的.
We are inviting Mr. Sadri Yazgic from AA, Assembler of Technical Department. He will attend some technical installation work on the Beijing Benz Automotive Co., Ltd.The Beijing Benz Automotive Co., Ltd. address is No. 8 Boxing Road (new engine plant), 100176 Beijing, China.

Mr. Sadri Yazgic is expected to come to China between January 21st, 2013 to July 7th , 2013. The stay will be168 days.


The personal data is as follows:.
The travel costs within China will be born by AA, A a branch of AA.”
Please kindly issue the visa for Mr. Sadri Yazgic.

Answer 1

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