谁能帮我修改下英文简历[e-mail]134-2442-XXXX(159-9961-XXXX)ObjectiveUtilizemycommunicationskillsandenergeticattitudetoobtainthepositionofsales.CharacternOptimistic,creativ

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谁能帮我修改下英文简历
CHENG LIUNANSHAN. SHENZHEN.China [e-mail] 134-2442-XXXX (159-9961-XXXX)
Objective Utilize my communication skills and energetic attitude to obtain the position of sales.
Character n Optimistic, creative, enthusiastic, self-motivated and ambitious
PracticeExperience n 2008/03--2008/09：ESIFBL International Beauty CompanySales section Business assistantResponsibility:1. Responsible for assisting the manager to accomplish the sales target by any means. 2. Responsible for the maintenance of existing customers and developing new customers.3. Responsible for some sales-related work such as manage the reimbursement of the cost of sales, arrange the sales conference and design some sale table by excel.etc.4. Responsible for dealing with other things which the manager account.Learn from the job:1. Accumulate some experience of the Business assist. 2. Upgrade my communication ability. 3. To possess a good consciousness of customer serviceAchievementNot only good at finishing the work responsibility but also well helped the manager to revolute the company’s management.
Education 2004.8-2008-7 CHANGCHUN UNIVERSITYIndustrial and Commercial Management
Self Assessment 1. Worked as a business assistant for nearly 1 year and get a position promotion in this practice experience.2. Have a pretty attitude to service customer and able to maintain customer well.3. Respond well in high-pressure atmosphere. 4. Good command in both English and Mandarin 5. With knowledge in Excel, Word, PowerPoint
Training 2008.5-2008.6 XIEN Consulting CompanyContent: how to be a good manage personHarvest: 1.Enriched the theory of management. 2.Laid a foundation for the latter work.

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CHENG LIUNANSHAN.SHENZHEN.China [e-mail] 134-2442-XXXX (159-9961-XXXX)
Objective Utilize my communication skills and energetic attitude to obtain the position of sales.
Character n Optimistic,creative,enthusiastic,self-motivated and ambitious
PracticeExperience n 2008/03--2008/09：ESIFBL International Beauty CompanySales section Business assistantResponsibility:1.Assisting the manager to accomplish the sales target by any means.2.Maintaining regular customers and developing new customers.3.Responsible for some sales-related work ：managing the reimbursement of the cost of sales,arranging the sales conference and designing some sale table by excel.etc.4.Dealing with other things which the manager account.Learn from the job:1.Accumulate some experience of the Business assist.2.Upgrade my communication ability.3.To possess a good consciousness of customer serviceAchievementNot only good at finishing the work responsibility but also well-helped the manager to revolute the company’s management.
Education 2004.8-2008-7 CHANGCHUN UNIVERSITYIndustrial and Commercial Management
Self Assessment 1.Worked as a business assistant for nearly 1 year and get a position promotion in this practice experience.2.Have a pretty attitude to service customer and be able to maintain customer well.3.Adapted well in high-pressure atmosphere.4.Good command in both English and Mandarin 5.With knowledge in Excel,Word,PowerPoint
Training 2008.5-2008.6 XIEN Consulting CompanyContent:how to be a good manage personHarvest:1.Enriched the theory of management.2.Laid a foundation for the latter work.